3rd Place :: Division A

 

'Twas the Night Before Break

Barrington
Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

This video shows what happens when the lights go out on the eve of holiday break.

Judge 1

Positives: Very well done.

Improvements: A couple of the edits during the complaints about judging - more variety of camera angles - just a couple.

Judge 2

Positives: Narration Was Nice Acting Worked Well

Improvements: Work on climax of story Pacing was slow

Judge 3

Positives: nice plot looked like they worked well together

Improvements: could be edited better transitions could be smoother