Bronze

 

Broken Heart

Homewood-Flossmoor
Animation

Entry Description

Animation created with people and lip syncing- not easy to do!

Judge 1

Positives: I loved the mirrors! They added a beautiful depth to the space and created some great visuals. I also loved the use of transitions in clothing and makeup for the before and after. Also, good song selection.

Improvements: The only issue I could find is that it seemed like it didn't need to be stop motion, it could have been a live action video. I don't know if this is a criticism or simply an observation.

Judge 2

Positives: music and action went together well. good use of the spaces to tell a visual story and the use of text where appropriate to emphasize certain parts.

Improvements: would like to see video personalized even more to make it different than a regular music video. Take more artistic liberties with the wardrobe to add more of your own personality to the video.

Judge 3

Positives: • Nice title integration • well thought out variety of shots • acting works very well for convey the dramatic nature of the piece

Improvements: No animation !!!1 I almost wanted to disqualify this entry as there is no animation here-- it entirely a time lapse photo exploration... the only thing that saved it is the integration of the titles