2nd Place :: Division A

 

She, Assassin

Glenbrook South
Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A female assassin is called upon to retrieve a valuable jewel stolen by a ruthless crime lord. When obstacles come in between her and her ultimate goal, she uses her special intelligence and physical training to overcome the obstacles. She is smart, she is courageous, and she is the best in the business. She will stop at nothing to rid the world of evil.

Judge 1

Positives: FUNNY 'Diamond' :) perfect 'hit' SFX

Improvements: could use more cutaway shots throughout to emphasize story (as opposed to camera pans) different ambient sounds within same scene

Judge 2

Positives: Nice story line Good costume design

Improvements: Sound editing Title sequence

Judge 3

Positives: nice use of transition nice use of camera angles

Improvements: better use of concept