Bronze

Dagorhir

Auburn

Documentary

Entry Description

Dagorhir is a medieval fighting game

Judge 1

Positives: The addition of the footage worked well. It gave the viewer a good example of the game's action. Jason speaks clearly and concisely which helps the viewer understand the game better.

Improvements: The music started randomly in the middle of the film. It could be incorporated more at the beginning. It would be good to have more live footage in order to have a better understanding of how the game looks.

Judge 2

Positives: I think it was nice to have samples of what the videographer was discussing, both modern and not. It was nice that the video wrapped up with the same photographs and video clips that it began with, because it was a circular storyline and brought me back to the main point.

Improvements: I appreciate the explanations, but the lighting isn't that great. It would be super fantastic to have a background that was more colorful to create interest for my eyes, and a little more lighting, and then the explanations given would be enhanced. Someone who does great scene clips is Jenna Marbles. (YouTube). Now, I understand her topic is nothing like this, but I think something can be taken away from the way she does clips, it's almost in a humorous way, or she finds a way to make it connect with what she needs to say next. Another good way would be to speak about the rules in this game, but do like Pewdiepie does, with a square on the top left of the screen and the actual battle scenes or weapon samples appearing on the rest of the screen. I'm not sure how this is done, but I'm sure it's something learned in CTE broadcasting. I think what I'm trying to say is: When you have a camera on your face for a lenghty amount of time you have to get creative with it and know what you want to say. My attention is on you.

Judge 3

Positives: Interesting topic with good supporting evidence.

Improvements: Has trouble describing how his work will contribute to his message. More logical organization.