Gold

Patience is a Virtue

Glenbrook South

Animation

Entry Description

A girl struggles with artist's block and begins to lose faith when she get's help from an unlikely source.

Judge 1

Positives: Great shots, I love the PoVs used, it really connects you to the papers as characters. I also really like the whimsical soundtrack and additional sound effects that liven up the action.

Improvements: The color balance is really the only issue I could find. If that was more consistent, it would make viewing the video a little smoother.

Judge 2

Positives: good music choice. added a magical feel to what was happening. Good job with creating a visual narrative with the paper and good variety of objects used in general.

Improvements: no negative comments. It worked well as - is.

Judge 3

Positives: • Great integration of the live character and objects in a stop motion piece • Nice sound effects integration • Great variety of camera shots

Improvements: Give some more breathing time before the ending... for the final tagline to be properly read...