Bronze

Cameras

Maine South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A picture is worth a thousand...

Judge 1

Positives: Good placement of surveillance cameras Editing was logical

Improvements: I wanted better character development of why the subject was being watched; I would like to see more camera angles, not necessarily more surveillance angles but different ones to explain the story

Judge 2

Positives: Liked the idea of using the point of view surveillance camera to tell the story. Liked the choice of music.

Improvements: Some of the dialogue was hard to understand. Maybe try lighting the final scene instead of using the room light in order to set the mood and add drama to the scene.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice job. Very creative and fun to watch. Good storyline and good mix of camera shots.

Improvements: Maybe spend more time on lighting some shots.