Bronze

Cartoon Race

Lake Forest

Animation

Entry Description

Cartoon car race over a mountainous track where the cars end up in the drink. 3D Animation

Judge 1

Positives: Nice use of accent sounds (screeching tires and such) as well as PoV shots mixed with long shots.

Improvements: The ending was a bit unclear and seemed a bit clipped. Perhaps some more resolution to the plot could help end it more smoothly.

Judge 2

Positives: Good job with having multiple point of view shots. Good textures in the animation to show variety.

Improvements: Maybe even more objects in the background.

Judge 3

Positives: • Nice shots , variety of angles help convey the story • Fun sound effects, they work really well

Improvements: There is not much of a story in the piece... I wish more was happening The piece looks like a well thought out intro to a bigger film...