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This is Lake Forest

Lake Forest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

This satire gives the community a chance to laugh at itself.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice narration--ironic--and music choice...lighting goes with theme well

Improvements: Mic overdriven at times...otherwise fine production

Judge 2

Positives: I liked the narration and music bed.

Improvements: Watch the white balance. The narration sounded over modulated at times.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice scene selection and nice editing. The quick cuts are nice. The use of music and the voice over were nice.

Improvements: Pay attention to your white balance. This can be fixed through the shooting or editing.