Bronze

Seniors 2014 CTEC

Vernon Hills

Documentary

Entry Description

A video about this years senior class.

Judge 1

Positives: The editing worked well. There was fluid movement between all of the scenes. The soundtrack fit well with the film.

Improvements: There wasn't much of a story. There could have been some dialogue or an element to the story to make it more compelling to the viewer. There was no information presented. The script should have been added at the beginning of the film or as each activity was presented.

Judge 2

Positives: Flackbacks of events works well, especially when the camera is in the crowd. The music worked. The light beat with a little techno, and the moving eighth notes works. It makes it feel as if the memories are positive,and it has slight variation on the same theme.

Improvements: I don't see anything really that could be considered "innovative." I've seen these kinds of things before. Be careful when mixing music and playing with volume. The last 30 seconds the volume abruptly went high and immediately low. Use crescendos/decrescendos/

Judge 3

Positives: The spirit message is clear. Nice collage.

Improvements: More video enhancement.