Bronze

LAX

West Chicago

Animation

Entry Description

A group of lacrosse-loving friends prepare to do battle in this original stop-motion animation short.

Judge 1

Positives: Very videogame-like, especially the opening scenes with the players getting their gear on. The speed of the animation worked well.

Improvements: The actually playing ended rather abruptly, and could have concluded with a victory to complete the videogame feel. Also, there seemed to be a few extra frames in the gearing up sequences that could be removed to make it smoother.

Judge 2

Positives: Music went well with the action. Interesting way to show gear being put on.

Improvements: Have gear put on in different ways for each player. More LAX playing.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice idea for the piece well thought out robotic movements of the charachters

Improvements: I wish there had been more animated part to the film.. in this case what would work: more stop motion pieces that ate integrated with the live action.. perhaps parts of the environment...