3rd Place :: Division AA

I HATE PIE

Wheaton North

Animation

Entry Description

This is my whiteboard stop motion animation.

Judge 1

Positives: Very funny. I really loved the voiceovers, that made the piece very engaging. Great weird story. The drawings were also beautifully detailed.

Improvements: The framing in the scenes that are not close ups are a little crooked. Not sure if that was intentional but it was a little off putting. There is also some object that is on the whiteboard in some of the early frames that looks like it shouldn't be there.

Judge 2

Positives: Very nice job with the stop animation drawing. The characters had good personalities because of doing a nice job with the making them so expressive. Good quick cuts mixed in with the regular framing. Had an overall good sense of humor as well.

Improvements: I have no comments for improvement. I thoroughly enjoyed the presentations as-is.

Judge 3

Positives: Great lip synching, Really well working sound Fun humor..

Improvements: great work!