Silver

Last Road Trip

West Chicago

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Seven friends take an epic last road trip together before college, enjoying an eclectic mix of "jammies" on their way toward an unexpected final destination in this original comedic short.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice car-camera simulation....really funny concept...so creative

Improvements: Costume changes started to drag a little, but it was so creative that I got past it

Judge 2

Positives: Loved the costume and "set" changes. Good use of music.

Improvements: Not much of a plot to follow. Watch your white balance and focus.

Judge 3

Positives: Entertaining video and great use of music to help tell your story. Time was obviously spent in changing the car scenes, which helped hold my interest.

Improvements: Pay attention to your white balance. It was fine on some angles and very blue in others. This can be fixed when shooting or in the editing process, so there's no reason to have it off. Be sure to export your video to fill the available frame.