Silver

Under Pressure

Downers Grove North

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A riff on the film "Adaptation."

Judge 1

Positives: The Canadian scenes are really funny....I would love to see that as a short! Nice camera work

Improvements: Nice angle overall..expand it a couple of times like Groundhog Day...avoid the film-student-shooting-in-film-dept cliche backgrounds and get outside or on another set for variety

Judge 2

Positives: Good use of graphics. I liked the B/W still going to full color motion video.

Improvements: Camera framing too tight at times. Don't cut the heads off. Watch the focus.

Judge 3

Positives: Good use of multiple camera angles and graphics. Nice use of green screen.

Improvements: Audio was a bit muddy. Also, tighten up your story line and editing to make this move along quicker.