Bronze

Jared Sliger: Beastmode

West Chicago

Documentary

Entry Description

A documentary style look into the life of Jared Sliger, an aspiring 16-year-old bodybuilder on his way to the top.

Judge 1

Positives: Editing worked well; filming subjects speaking, Jared getting ready to work out and then working out flowed together well. The inclusion of several friends worked well.

Improvements: The sound from the subjects being interviewed could be improved with a mic up closer. It would have been good to know what Jared is working towards. Is there a competition or ultimate goal he wants to achieve?

Judge 2

Positives: Nice catch: Asking a question at the beginning. Nice candid shots. Adds to the story. "Stronger" works for this video. Good musical selection.

Improvements: If he is working on bodybuilding, why are there shots with him in his jeans? He should be working out in the gym or running through russia. Be selective with shots. It would have been nice to see some stats on the screen.

Judge 3

Positives: Good supporting shots. Attractive topic for young audience.

Improvements: Purpose could have been more clearly stated. Audio reinforcement not always appropriate.