Bronze

Pirate Princess

Lyons Township

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

This is an original comedy that spoofs a lot of pirate and fantasy movies. It draws from a lot of stereotypes about girls, poking fun at the stereotypes while also making sure to clearly demonstrate how silly those same stereotypes are.

Judge 1

Positives: Funny premise...very creative and goofy in a fun way

Improvements: Dialog obscured...could have been mic'd better....edits are a little jumpy

Judge 2

Positives: Good fight sequence. Creative use of a hair brush as a weapon!

Improvements: Cutting a few heads off. Watch the camera framing. A few of the edits didn't make sense.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice plot idea and aside from some quality issues, it flowed well. Nice use of slow motion. Was the dog pooping?

Improvements: Audio was weak. Video was very low quality, possibly shot with a phone? Blurry. Don't smile when you are trying to show a serious scene.