EGHS Swimmers Looking to Rebuild With Newcomers and Underclassmen - ID# 11

Elk Grove High School

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The Elk Grove High School boys swimming team is looking to capitalize on its freshman class and new talent. Video shot, edited, and narrated by Collin Keane.

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• 4/1 1:24 pm - Needed to see the interview and some shots were shaky. It felt more like a sports stats piece instead of a story.
• 3/3 10:00 am - Keep NAT sounds with your VO, just lower it to -30/-35, would like to see the swimmers in a live interview, not just a VO.

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