Hyperbowl - ID# 200
Neuqua Valley
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
Scott, living a regular life, gets pulled into a world where hyperboles come to life and needs to stop the corrupt king of the world, Balthazar before he destroys everything and everyone.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/23 12:49 pm - This was a lot of fun and your commitment to the bit was so good. You have some wonderful shots and effects and that really helped drive the story and ensure that the impact wasn't lost. Great job with the titles and fantastic edits, from the speed-ramping to the green screen. One thing you might want to work on is the sound design as the voices was a bit hard to hear. Other than that, this was great! Keep up the great work!
Judge 1
Positives: -Creative concept: Living hyperboles is unique. -Protagonist's courage: His determination shines.
Improvements: -World-building details: More on how hyperboles live. -Antagonist depth: Flesh out the corrupt king’s motives.
Judge 2
Positives: - The overall concept is very clever. I love the use of motion graphics to call out specific "hyperboles", as well as a few of the VFX – such as the car speeding. - The overall edit is well done and conforms well to the general pacing of a trailer.
Improvements: - I would recommend shooting in 24fps, to give your imagery more of a "cinematic" feel, if possible. - The sound mix could use a bit of work to target dialogue and make sure that all of the hyperboles can be clearly heard.
Judge 3
Positives: Good blur on shot in car. Nice visual puns.
Improvements: Dialogue could be better mixed for clarity. Would have like to see more emotive close-ups on characters.
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