PREY - ID# 230
Wheeling High School
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
This movie trailer is about a man who gets stalked anywhere he goes. CREDIT: Dom Paplinski and Aleks Panek as editors, producers, and actors.
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- 4/24 2:08 pm - Nice work, especially with the nighttime filming, that is no small feat. You did a really nice job using a variety of shots as well, making your close-ups effective. One critique for the story is that it needs more action and build-up. We need to establish a world in the story, and then show an incident or situation that disrupts the world, and then the action or drama that the incident creates. Because this is a movie trailer, you can always leave it with a cliffhanger but at least show the problem and some solutions. Overall, this felt rushed and confusing, like there were scenes missing, so the tense music didn't quite match what we were watching. Overall, you have a really good start here and definitely have the foundational film and editing skills to make some great content. Keep up the good work!
- 2/26 2:19 pm - Lighting is beautiful. Nice fade into the title page at the end. Some of the scenes felt a little dragged out.
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