CROCUS - ID# 258
Metea Valley
News Package
Entry Description
An environmental science project at Argonne National Laboratory
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/1 1:02 pm - The story was very interesting. The soundbite was a too long, it could have been chopped up and written to differently. We never establish who he is exactly. It was lacking good broll
- 3/4 11:03 pm - You hooked me with your opening but then lost me a bit. Who is this guy talk to me, the viewer? Consider using a LT. And then he goes on for a long time. It would be good to break this up a little more. Some interesting broll of the scientific instruments. Good audio quality.
- 3/2 8:21 pm - Would like to see you tell me the story, not the interviewer Interview is too long, paraphrase or summarize and lead that to a 10 to 12 sec SOT. Started well, good lead into the SOT but who is he?
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