Hispanic Heritage Month - ID# 250
York
News Package
Entry Description
York High School embraces Hispanic heritage by embracing cultural food, dances, and activities.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/1 1:04 pm - Very enjoyable package to watch. Needed more nats throughout the piece. If you have a lower third, she doesn't need to introduce herself in the package. I loved the pix sound effects. Her SOT was too long and I wanted to hear the music with the line dancing
- 3/4 11:14 pm - Interesting pkg. Nice job introducing us to your subject. Work on storytelling. The story should come from you, visuals, multiple interviews, etc., rather than one source. Avoid jump cuts. Consider location of interview, tighten the composition. Keep working!
- 3/2 8:32 pm - Would like to see you tell me the story, not the interviewer Interview too long, paraphrase or summarize and lead that to a 10 to 12 sec SOT Lower 3rd would help
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