Part Time (Trailer) - ID# 311
Deerfield
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
This trailer is based on the original film "Part Time" and showcases the awkwardness and complexity of recent high school graduates during that last summer before college.
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- 4/25 12:54 pm - Good effort. I like the authentic graphic at the top. Make sure your background music doesn't overpower the dialogue, which was hard to hear. Also, the story wasn't very clear. Keep working on it!
- 4/23 12:38 pm - This was a great attempt and started off very strong. It did seem to lose some steam and pace as the trailer went on, almost like you ran out of time or footage. Nice job with the overall trailer. Moving forward, you could use a voiceover to help things become more clear. Also, watch your audio work, and possibly over-dub or capture audio using a separate device to enhance the audio. Keep up the good work!
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