Aware - ID# 386
Shepard High School
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
This public service announcement reminds you to always be aware!
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- 4/23 10:16 pm - Amazing use of stop motion but I don't think the message is clear. It's hard to tell exactly what we are supposed to be aware of?
- 2/26 1:43 pm - I was pleasantly surprised to see some high quality stop motion animation. From a craft perspective, well done. It takes a lot of work to make an animated project. Unfortunately, as a PSA about being aware (of your surroundings), it didn't quite communicate the urgency of being aware. The music should have changed, the sound effects of an impending accident could have been done better, to help convey what was happening. Even adding more sound effects in the beginning (footsteps, ambient city sound, cars, people talking in the background) would have helped bring this scene to life. Also, the music in the beginning should have cut out completely AFTER the car accident. You could have brought in some sad or tragic music to convey the seriousness of what happened as a result of not being aware and/or being distracted by your phone.
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