Lincoln House Coffee Shop - ID# 54

Huntley

News Package

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Entry Description

News package showcasing a new coffee shop in town: Lincoln House & Co.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/1 1:08 pm - There are jump cuts, it felt like a restaurant review instead of a story. Be careful with dangling mic cords and the shots were not too my liking. The story just drops off at the end.
• 3/4 11:18 pm - PKG opens a little rough with an immediate fade up on interview. Audio quality is good, nicely identified with LTs. Watch mic placement...try not to show so much of cord. Vary interview location shots. All in front of brick wall. Strive for a cleaner beginning and end. The end just kind of drops off.
• 3/3 9:40 am - Would like to see you tell me the story, not the interviewer Interview is too long, paraphrase or summarize and lead that to a 10 to 12 sec SOT Need to add a lower 3rd for the other 3 people in this package.

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