Gold

Spoof on the classic film noir genre with a twinkling of school spirit.

Positives: very cute writing very nice editing

Improvements: audio issues in parking lot - your voice levels lower than music

Positives: Main character acting was great Lighting was successful

Improvements: White balance was inconsistent script needed to be revised

Positives: nice use of sound and music nice transitions

Improvements: need better camera angles need better lighting