Silver

Unconventional Love

Metea Valley

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A boy reflects on his experiences with his crush and his other friend. He remembers one day in particular as he goes on a walk, building up the courage to confess his love.

Judge 1

Positives: Good use of camera shots - liked the high angle during one of the walking sequences Good character and plot development

Improvements: Audio and sound mix could be improved - possibly some natural sound or dialogue could be introduced A little better light in the closing scene could be an improvement

Judge 2

Positives: Nice camera work. Good use of different angles. The music worked well with the story line.

Improvements: In the door scene at the end, I would suggest lighting it a little so it's not so silhouetted. Maybe cut in some different shots during the walking scenes so the scenes aren't so long, but not if you think it would hurt the flow of the video.

Judge 3

Positives: Great job. The storyline works very well with the visuals. Great narration and music mix.

Improvements: No improvement needed.