Bronze

Burton

Neuqua Valley

Commercial

Entry Description

This is an original commercial for the snowboarding company Burton. I shot this video and edited it to promote this brand because I thought my concept would sell the product most effectively.

Judge 1

Positives: Sound. Editing

Improvements: Subject was not lit well. More product shots

Judge 2

Positives: Nice variety of shots, and they're edited together well.

Improvements: The editing and pacing of this could be sped up to make it a little more exciting. It didn't really make me want to run out and buy a Burton snowboard.

Judge 3

Positives: I love the end shot, snow sweep into the logo.

Improvements: Use less of the preparation shots and more actual snowboarding. Tighten up the editing.