1st Place :: Division AA

Stop Continuity

Batavia

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two friends struggle to edit their video, they are having continuity problems. Soon things start to get strange....

Judge 1

Positives: Really funny...it all worked really...great editing and creativity

Improvements: I can't think of any ways this could have been done better

Judge 2

Positives: Loved the concept. The edits worked.

Improvements: The shot framing could be tightened up. A few scenes were too quick to take it in.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice use of subtle humor with the two scenes. Creative idea!

Improvements: Your scenes are blurry and audio is out of sync.