Silver

"Bullying"

Eisenhower

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

Making it seem like you are being bullied but then seeing that you can get help from others and making someone feel bad of bullying and it's not something good.

Judge 1

Positives: I liked the typewriter effect and the use of closeups.

Improvements: I felt let down that the only solution given was to call a number or log onto a website. "Bullying is everywhere" was a little trite for me.

Judge 2

Positives: The camera shots and typing sound worked well because it made me pay attention to the written type.

Improvements: There was an audio issue at the end.

Judge 3

Positives: The message is great. Kids speaking to kids is effective.

Improvements: Either get really close up on the speaking mouths or show whole face...looks sloppy and halfway. Grammar needs to be improved upon.