Gold

 

Grit

Oak Park River Forest
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie trailer for an hour and a half documentary following our varsity football team for a season.

Judge 1

Positives: Really nice variety of footage and some impactful shots went well over the dramatic & intense coaches speech. Good choice in music that set the tone and fit perfectly with the coaches speech.

Improvements: Perhaps there could've been a couple player reaction shots or close-ups, especially to the coaches speech.

Judge 2

Positives: Great opening in the middle of the drama. The camera work really puts the viewer in the action.

Improvements: A little hard to make out the monologue. I want more information about any conflict in the story.

Judge 3

Positives: Both the story and the tone were portrayed well. Provided a nice variety of footage and the lighting did a good job capturing the mood, especially with the night game scenes you could still see everything clearly.

Improvements: Just fine tune the editing a little bit. There was one little jump at about 27 seconds in.