A promo video we shot and edited for our school's Variety Show using and Canon T5i camera and Final Cut Pro X.
Positives: You did a great job getting lots of information into a short amount of time. The editing to music was well done.
Improvements: This is getting really picky... but I would replace the tight shot of the microphone that hits early in the promo. Took three viewings to figure out what it was. I loved the beat of the music but not sure the lyrics tie with what you're promoting.
Positives: Good camera work and editing.
Improvements: Some more variety of shots. A bit of subtle nat sound always enhances video.
Positives: Great editing! Great job dealing with low light shooting.
Improvements: At the beginning when the music is going fast I would like to see a little bit more pace to the editing but I still think it looks great.