Bronze

A boy who had never felt comfortable in his own skin tries on Man-Up, and emerges a confident man for the first time.

Positives: Interesting concept with an easy-to-follow shot sequence.

Improvements: The video would have been stronger had you used some natural sound from the video.

Positives: Good variety of camera shots/angles. Narrator audio was nice and clean.

Improvements: Nat sound seems to be needed, especially in the beginning.

Positives: Nice shooting. Great close ups

Improvements: I found it to be confusing. It could have moved a little more quickly.