Bronze

Angel With A Shotgun

Neuqua Valley

Music Video

Entry Description

The music video follows a boy as he finds that he has a fatal condition, but he does not care, and decides to make the best of the time he has left by defending the girl he likes when she beings to fight with her boyfriend.

Judge 1

Positives: I liked the use of words found on papers to express feelings.

Improvements: Inconsistent quality of the video detracted from the video.

Judge 2

Positives: I thought your handheld camera work mixed with the editing worked well. Good edits with the music.

Improvements: I would be careful of your white balance. Colors changed a lot between scenes. I don't think this was intentional. I would also change your frame size more often. I felt that too many of the same size medium shots were used.

Judge 3

Positives: General concept / dramatic tension was good. Fight scene worked pretty well.

Improvements: For a music video, there were too many shots of dialog between characters. You need to limit these in this format as they don't work to forward your story. There were color temp differences between some of the shots. Initially I thought they might be artistic but I think they were just not paid attention to.