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SKITS - Pilot Episode

Lyons Township

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

SKITS is a sketch comedy program. This is from the pilot episode.

Judge 1

Positives: Great sound...like the harmonica interludes...works well....nice acting

Improvements: A little disjointed, but that was probably on purpose....it felt a little out of context

Judge 2

Positives: I liked the out takes at the end. The graphics and music were fun.

Improvements: I didn't get the plot. Some audio transitions were a bit harsh.

Judge 3

Positives: Nice job taking the time to green screen. Make your keying as clean as possible, though.

Improvements: Fade out your music. Jump cuts in your audio cheapen the work. Also, cutting to black seems like sloppy editing at times. Relying on outtakes to add to your video means the main video was lacking something. I was confused on the plot.