Bronze

Horseplay GPS Sketch

Riverside Brookfield

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Dick Johnson explains what voices are included in the upcoming Garble GPS voice pack.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice celebrity factor...funny....the stand-up analogy is good

Improvements: Some shadows are distracting...kind of relies on Dick Johnson though the students are funny

Judge 2

Positives: The sound was good. It was lit well.

Improvements: This is a recording of a live skit as opposed to a video story. Watch out for people milling about behind your set.

Judge 3

Positives: Obviously, having a celebrity in your video goes a long way. This was a very entertaining video and the use of the backdrop was a good idea. Editing was also well done.

Improvements: I'm sure you didn't have a lot of time with Mr Johnson, so maybe use a prompter for him so he isn't seen reading from the paper. There was some unnecessary camera movements in your scenes. If you need to adjust the frame, do so and then shoot a fresh scene. Also, if someone stumbles on their script, re-shoot. Finally, the people moving behind the backdrop was distracting.