Silver

Forget

Riverside Brookfield

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

The story of a boy who somehow has the ability to go back in time every time he hears that one word, "forget."

Judge 1

Positives: Great job of conveying the overall mood by using black & white footage, edits fading to black and slow cross-dissolves. Well executed video effects (reversing the footage and dissolving subjects out of frame) to convey going back in time. You also created a nice sense of mystery to entice the audience.

Improvements: Overall you had very nice shot composition but the one with him saying "I, don't, know!" could've been framed tighter. Some of the audio excerpts sounded a bit hollow, but the narration was perfect and great choice for music.

Judge 2

Positives: Loved the use of black and white and the soft dissolve gave the entire trailer a great loopy feel.

Improvements: I feel a bit disconnected from the concept stated in the description. I think sometimes in trailers it's okay to be more direct. I would include more action shots if possible or a quicker edit to imply action.

Judge 3

Positives: Interesting idea for a story and did a good job demonstrating the message and tone of the film. Could hear the dialogue very clearly and the music fit the mood very well.

Improvements: There could be some editing improvements to make it more smoother. One scene in particular it seemed a character was talking but the words were matching up funny.