3rd Place :: Division AA

 

Winter Break is Here

York
Music Video

Entry Description

A holiday music video for an original song - "Winter Break is Here"

Judge 1

Positives: Great energy and fun. Pan shots are good.

Improvements: Sometimes the singers are distracting. Careful with transitions.

Judge 2

Positives: Good job with original music. Story clear and well told by performers.

Improvements: Some singing needed more voice coaching. Some locations were over-used.

Judge 3

Positives: Very festive original music! Massive props! (Rather well recorded and produced too!) I like the sort of happy-go-lucky feel of the video. You just kind of embraced it and went running with it which is great! Camera work was also pretty good, with each singer kind of getting their own little unique scene, as well as a solid overall edit (no repeat shots!) and the sound composition of the whole piece. Overall this is pretty high quality film making!

Improvements: If I have to nit pick, some of the lip syncing was a tad bit off, and I feel like you could have done a bit more work in post with color correction, or maybe some extra work with effects... I don't know, this was awesome!