Bronze

Legendary Coffey

Batavia

Documentary

Entry Description

This documentary looks at how one of our students manages his exceptionally busy life and manages to be very successful in all aspects of his school life. .

Judge 1

Positives: The sound worked well. Subjects voices were clear audible. Micah's story was good He did not repeat information. He talked about many things and there seemed to be a progression from his current activities to what he wants to accomplish.

Improvements: The lighting could have been better. Subjects faces were in the shadows. The soundtrack could haven been included at more parts of the film.

Judge 2

Positives: I liked that the people interviewed were his parents, and it cut away to other personal family things. The introduction to the story was okay, it became comedic after I realized what was happening. I hope this was the intent.

Improvements: The lighting was a little low. I think it could have been brighter, especially when interviewing his father. When interviewing the main character, it all happens at his dining room table. It would be good to mix up the locations. Get him on site, at school, or a game.

Judge 3

Positives: Creative and compelling opener. Clear message.

Improvements: 3 seconds over time limit, but the message is valuable for young audience. Some audio difficult to understand.