This video shows what happens when the lights go out on the eve of holiday break.
Positives: Very well done.
Improvements: A couple of the edits during the complaints about judging - more variety of camera angles - just a couple.
Positives: Narration Was Nice Acting Worked Well
Improvements: Work on climax of story Pacing was slow
Positives: nice plot looked like they worked well together
Improvements: could be edited better transitions could be smoother