Silver

Epic Parent Night Speech

Barrington

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

JJ Good gives a speech for parents at back-to-school night.

Judge 1

Positives: cute premise

Improvements: news desk sound sounds off mic "2001" bkgrd music a bit too loud, distracting.

Judge 2

Positives: Great editing Nice Shot angles

Improvements: Work on Script Wasn't sure where the news story part fit in .

Judge 3

Positives: simple story nice use of lighting

Improvements: needed a little smother transition better camera angles