Gold

Five to Eleven

Batavia

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

The highly anticipated sequel to the award winning Five to Eight comes Five to Eleven. Brian has had bad luck all day, but will things get better for him tonight?

Judge 1

Positives: Nice Clerks send-up...black and white was a good choice....nice use of music and editing

Improvements: Some scenes too tight, but great nonetheless, some focuses were a little jerky

Judge 2

Positives: Camera framing was very good. The editing made for a believable story. Nice work.

Improvements: I didn't get the plot line. I'm not sure about the use of black and white.

Judge 3

Positives: You obviously put a lot of work into the shooting of this video. It would have been easy to limit the number of scenes, but you took the extra steps to shoot different angles to tell a more complete story.

Improvements: While you had many shots to work with, some of the cuts in the first half were a bit too quick, leaving me confused. Also, you said this was a sequel, but it doesn't seem to stand on its own, which it really needs to. While it was shot and put together well, I didn't fully understand the plot.