Bronze

Walking & texting can cause issues

Positives: Interesting topic and the sound effect of the road was a good choice but... (see below)

Improvements: I thought the sound was way too high and you didn't get to the point quickly enough

Positives: Interesting parallel.

Improvements: I wish there were wider shots so I could have grasped the concept a little better.

Positives: Sound effects of traffic was clever.

Improvements: Kids shouldn't be laughing when supposed to be upset. Not a very important message.