Silver

Rock Paper Scissors

Barrington

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial promoting a one-of-a-kind hair salon that conforms to each individual customer.

Judge 1

Positives: testimonials and music

Improvements: Bit too long

Judge 2

Positives: Nicely edited, and good choice of music.

Improvements: This could be shorter, which would keep the viewer's interest, while still getting the message across.

Judge 3

Positives: Well shot, good variety of customers and cutters. Gives a good sense of the place and why people would choose this shop over others.

Improvements: A couple more testimonials might be good, even under b-roll.