Silver

 

"Baby Daddy"

Eisenhower
Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Two students take home a baby for a childcare project and it ends up harder than they expected.

Judge 1

Positives: Good choice of music for the story. Trailer does a good job conveying the subject matter and had a nice flow to it. Like the continuation of the Tom & Jerry conversation.

Improvements: There were some issues with talent audio, perhaps you could've overdubbed voice tracks. Also for a trailer I felt like there could've been more shots edited in.

Judge 2

Positives: Well edited and really captured the tone of a light-hearted buddy comedy. The acting was outstanding.

Improvements: I would have like to have seen some color correction on the footage to add more of a consistent look to the shoots, which seems feasible considering the high quality of the graphics and edit.

Judge 3

Positives: The story and theme were very clear, the narrator and the actors did a good job setting the tone and characters. I knew that this was meant to be a comedy and light hearted film. I thought the music worked well and the sound quality was pretty good. Everyone spoke clearly and was easy to understand.

Improvements: The lighting in the apartment scenes was very orange so I thought that could be improved. Also, in the beginning it seemed like there was a little editing error. There was a black screen for a few seconds after the trailer message went away.