3rd Place :: Division AA

Have to Go

Geneva

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

One person finds out what happens when you drink too much water at the Auto show.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice communication of the sense of urgency, good acting---bordering on slapstick...nice choice of music bed

Improvements: Jump from music to natural sound was abrupt, the 1920's silent film comedy came across---perhaps a graphic dialog board or two could enhance the humor

Judge 2

Positives: Some good choices for camera angles. The editing was tight and the flow was right.

Improvements: There were some small tech issues such as focus. The music bed would drop abruptly. A smooth fade would have been better.

Judge 3

Positives: Its great that you took the time to shoot on location at the auto shot and the music really worked well with the theme and location. Great use of camera angles to tell your story and keep the viewer interested. Shooting the fountains was an excellent touch. Telling a story without audio is difficult, but you did an excellent job.

Improvements: There is't much to pick on here, other than perhaps making the plot a bit more interesting.