Bronze

Eating Disorders

Bremen

Feature Story

Entry Description

Eating disorders is explained and addresses

Judge 1

Positives: good camera shots interesting premise great shot with the magazines

Improvements: sound quality uneven not sure why gym equipment shot occurred when it had nothing to do with it

Judge 2

Positives: Serious, important topic to tackle and it's good to interview a nutrition expert, but perhaps also a psychology expert would add more depth to the report. Good shooting and editing of B-roll of students but sometimes news photographers shoot people below the shoulders without them being identifiable. When you shoot crowds and you're focusing on a specific topic like this, you don't necessarily want to be showing identifiable people.

Improvements: The reporter's stand up at the beginning and the end was delivered a little rapidly. Slowing down would make the delivery a little more conversational. To add more depth, you could perhaps add more statistics on how pervasive the problem is among young people and what contributes to the problem.

Judge 3

Positives: Good camera work. The interview and b-roll shots were framed well and had good composition.

Improvements: Additional interviews would have been an improvement. The talent/voiceover sounded a little rushed. Utilizing natural sound during B-roll shots would have been an improvement.