This is a commercial for Monster Energy to show how their energy drink improves a skateboarder's performance
Positives: Great use of nat sound and I really liked the video. Nice editing also.
Improvements: Never really saw a bottle of what you're selling. One shot up early but it could have been anything.
Positives: Nice skateboarding video. I like the old film look.
Improvements: I couldn't tell what the guy was drinking towards the beginning. Use an extreme closeup to make it obvious he's drinking Monster. Even more, shorter skating clips edited together might work well.
Positives: Nice editing. Great effects. Good use of nat sound.
Improvements: The product needed to be more or a focal point. I didn't know what you were selling. Some of the edits could have been a little bit tighter.