Silver

The Mysterious and Slightly Curious Adventures of Dr. Cottontail

Batavia

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

I scientist desperate to take over the world, ends up finding love in the strangest of places.

Judge 1

Positives: Black and white works well ala Young Frankenstein...nice shooting

Improvements: Lead actor should take out the earring to get into character....set dressing in lab could have been more obscured by different lighting and shadows

Judge 2

Positives: The credits were awesome. I liked the black and white.

Improvements: Some of the scenes were dark. Always light the face of your subject. The scenes could be paired down making the video shorter. It started to drag.

Judge 3

Positives: Use of black and white worked well. Funny plot. Decent acting.

Improvements: Audio was not consistent and weak in some cuts. Maybe put more time into use of props and location for shooting.The plot drags, with tighter shots and editing, this can be improved.