3rd Place :: Division AA

Chain Reaction

Batavia

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Words and actions do not just disappear. They create a snowball effect, a chain reaction. When someone is hurt or offended, it can stay with them forever and often influence their own actions.

Judge 1

Positives: Camera angles and framing did good job in telling the story Audio and music seem to mix well

Improvements: I was confused with who some of the characters were, seemed too random. So possibly some more detail in the script; Even though most camera angles were good the camera inside the refrigerator seemed "thrown in" and not necessary. When directing the camera shots, think about the audience interpretation of that angle or frame.

Judge 2

Positives: Great mix of camera shots. Your choice of close ups and racking focus helped tell the story. Nice choice of music. The pacing of the edit worked real well

Improvements: Nothing major to improve on. Not sure of the reason for the shot from inside the refrigerator where the girl gets water.

Judge 3

Positives: Awesome. Fantastic job. The storyline was outstanding and the visuals worked so well together. Excellent editing.

Improvements: Nothing to improve.