Bronze

Two of Me Movie Trailer

Riverside Brookfield

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Two of Me is a movie trailer that is for a fake movie that was written, shot, and edited by Michael Frushour. Produced in November of 2013.

Judge 1

Positives: Really great job capturing the tone of the story through the use of dimly lit shots and music. Good sense of timing. A particularly nice sequence was the door opening and the light spilling onto the main character lying in bed.

Improvements: The first few shots were a little awkward because of the camera angles. First shot was over character's right shoulder. Second shot should've been over the other character's left shoulder. Be aware of the 180 degree rule for frame of reference. The title shot should've been held a little longer. Cut to credits too quickly.

Judge 2

Positives: Great use of music. I found the scenes intriguing and got a sense of a larger story.

Improvements: I'd pick up the pace, I'd like to see more action if possible with the story.

Judge 3

Positives: There were some really dramatic and nice shots, I liked how you made him appear in the mirror. Set the tone very well, the lighting was dark but you could still see everything clearly while capturing the mood.

Improvements: The scene where he is walking on the street and answers his phone, we lose what he is saying when he turns his back to the camera.