Bronze

O'Connell Water Bottle Commercial

Riverside Brookfield

Commercial

Entry Description

This commercial shows how many water bottles are thrown away and how to save them.

Judge 1

Positives: Good topic. Nice use of nat-sound with the water bottles.

Improvements: Should have a variety of shots of water bottles being tossed and fouling the environment... not just a jump-cut sequence on the table. Also, this is a run-on sentence... bad grammar: "Save the environment and your money buy reusable water bottles today."

Judge 2

Positives: The graphics over the out of focus video works nicely. The audio was nice and clean

Improvements: Some of the shots of the water bottles were repetitive.

Judge 3

Positives: Very direct. I liked the opening sequence.

Improvements: there is a glitch in one of your edits. I think it helps to see a reusable bottle in the end.